The Friday Fictioneers. It is more than a collection of eclectic wordsmiths hailing from all regions of this great big world. There are mothers, fathers, sons and daughters, brothers and sisters, aunts, uncles and cousins. Namely people of every age and nationality who love to use a simple singular photo as the starting point for a quick 100 word journey.
Obviously you have some attraction to writing since you are here. Fiction too, or you would not know about FF. So what is your desire as you circle through the bevvy of writing beauties offered this week? You can find a variety of stories to satiate your wishes. What follows is my attempt.
The group of people worked their way through the collection of unusual devices, stopping briefly to read the short blurbs on the plaques accompanying each display. One man began to shake his head as soon as he read one of the plaques.
“There is no way! This is not true.”
Underneath a nondescript device was the name “Oppenheimer.”
“You don’t seriously expect us to believe the father of the Atomic bomb created this!”
The tour guide moved beside the man and nodded in agreement.
“No sir, that belonged to Stanley his brother.”
“What did it do?”
“Shock cats!”
“Seriously?”
“No.”
That’s fun. And a good title, too.
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Oh, those crazy Oppenheimer brothers.
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🙂
Really good one.
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Ha.. Jolts of joy I presume
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Well I’m glad it’s not the “patented cat shocker”; that would be inhumane. Much better the real Oppenheimer… Oh, wait, hmm… 😉
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I have to ask: is there a hidden physics nod to Schroedinger here?
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If so it is hidden from me as well. But I like the thought I am that clever.
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Wow – this is fitting. Good job! Nan 🙂
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I got a good chuckle with this story!
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Nuclear weapon…cat shocker…all about the same really, isn’t it? 🙂
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I wonder what the smart-ass tour guide will have to say when they get round to Occam’s Razor. 🙂
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I imagine him being so jaded every tour is unique.
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Dear Joe,
I love your title. Cute story, although I can see why this invention never caught on.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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The other Oppenheimer’s career trajectory never matched his brother’s.
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What a fun little story! I love the final “Seriously?” “No.”
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Funny. Imagine the sibling rivalry in this Oppenheimer family. Well told.
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Thanks. I can just see them at Christmas dinner with their boasts.
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With a title like that, I had to read on and it didn’t disappoint.
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I am so glad the title jerked you in. I appreciate your time and opinion and invite you back for more.
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