She felt shattered. She had borne her soul to him, sharing all her feelings. She declared them openly, publicly, holding nothing back. Literally she felt the same as if she was stark naked as no veil of covering to her heart remained.
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Ouch! Vulnerability.
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We all (that dabble in love) face it, but not all take that fateful leap.
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Love hurts. Painful it is.
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Especially if it is unrequited! Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Ouch! Too vulnerable for words, there.
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That is what I was aiming for, i am glad it had that effect.
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I like how you start with the ending and work back to the beginning. The first line hooks the reader in.
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Hi Christine. Sometimes you are good and sometimes you are lucky. I will let you decide which this is, but thanks so much for the kind words and for reading.
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It is awful giving your all to someone who turns around and betrays you.
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I think that is why so many won’t.
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