The idea of Sunday Photo Fiction is to create a story / poem or something using around about 200 words with the photo as a guide.
Tom didn’t want to believe it was true, but here he stood outside the train station in Lisbon, Portugal all alone. When they met on the isolated beach in Bermuda it had all seemed a dream. She was gorgeous with her long slender legs, a bikini body any man would dream for and a face of an angel. He never had believed in love whether at first sight or ever until that very second. Merita Carbones had mesmerized him, pulling him deep into her heart.
The plan was to meet here, now after she returned to Spain to tell Hernando she wanted him no more. Tom checked his watch to make sure he had not computed the time difference from home incorrectly. He scanned the train platform as worry filled his chest. Where was she?
Merita clutched a small bag with a few of her belongings while she hustled down the steps. She missed the early train, but there was time to catch the later one. Tom would wait, she knew that.
She stopped on the last step when Hernando cleared his throat.
“You promised me forever. Forever starts now!”
Hopes dashed in the final line. Good story!
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Great finale, wide open!
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Ahh. That’s not going to sit well then. Good story
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That’s not going to be a happy ending for them. Great take.
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Oh dear! It obviously wasn’t meant to be!
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Wow! I was hooked. The last line set the fireworks. I just loved it. Good work.
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Thank you, I enjoyed writing this and am considering continuing it in the weeks to come.
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Whoa! Excellent!
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Thank you, I may continue the story this week.
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